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Re: Spirited #3
*hugs* Jack, my friend, I finally found a frakking scanner. Oh, and keep this scene. Pretty please. Cal.
Mar 29, 2007 -
Re: Spirited #2
Heya!
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Spirited #1
'Lo, again, Jack! The same things go for this as the other, feel free to send up a flag at any vague or obtuse-ness. Also, I probably have stated something ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Spirited 0.1
'Lo Jack! Look who finally got around to it. If there is something unclear or you vague or illegible please pound on my skull, that or ask a question, I ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Hourglass No.1
'Cause you are special, too. :D If there is anything unclear or illegible, please say something. *grins* Cal.
Mar 20, 2007 -
Re: Sonnet 1 - On a Lost Love
Did I mention that you are my hero? Sep'ration curtailed by the hands of fate, Prithee, my dear, forgive me for the past, For 'thin me, thou shalt find a ...
Mar 12, 2007 -
Re: The Hidden Usergroup
Oh gods. How lovely. Did Brad just go all covetous on smaur? I do believe he did. HAHAHA! This made me laugh, a lot. Can't wait to read more. This ...
Mar 12, 2007 -
Re: Nightime Butterflies
Sarah, you're back. *huggles* 1. Everything in this world was so new to me, seeing a boy that made my stomach flip was a familiar and welcome feeling. // This ...
Mar 12, 2007 -
Re: Are You Me?
I don't really have time to do a critique of this write now. But, I saw it and was all 'Whee...' . I'll get around to saying something more constructive ...
Mar 11, 2007 -
Re: Sonnet 2 - On a Hopeful Love
Okay, so. I am about to take a twelve gauge to this computer. I spent a very long, detailed time on critiquing this sonnet of yours, and poof. It all ...
Mar 8, 2007 -
Re: Dolor
Hey Bradums, (Look who is actually attempting to critique something.) I adore S1, especially the imagery of linen birds. My mother and I used to take napkins and fold them ...
Mar 8, 2007 -
Re: Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
I have a confession to make, I just mooched Twilight , and read it in the span of a few hours. Note, this book is first person narrative. Also note, ...
Feb 11, 2007 -
Re: Body and Soul
Holy frak, Jig. Way to bust out the page-age. I started a crit for you, so far I've done I think the first four pages. I hope to have it ...
Jan 30, 2007 -
Re: Greenjackets (4th draft)
Cause I can't pass up your historical fiction... Greenjackets [Sharpe! Yay, squee moment.] “Dieu ne pas pour le gros battalions, mais pour sequi teront le meilleur.” – Voltaire ( God ...
Jan 13, 2007 -
Re: the nine lives of allen grey [r]
Okay, this really isn't a critique of any sort, cause my brain is in all places at once. I just got back from seeing Children of Men, and this story ...
Jan 10, 2007
