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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Spirited #3

    *hugs* Jack, my friend, I finally found a frakking scanner. Oh, and keep this scene. Pretty please. Cal.

    Mar 29, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Spirited #2

    Heya!

    Mar 25, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Spirited #1

    'Lo, again, Jack! The same things go for this as the other, feel free to send up a flag at any vague or obtuse-ness. Also, I probably have stated something ...

    Mar 25, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Spirited 0.1

    'Lo Jack! Look who finally got around to it. If there is something unclear or you vague or illegible please pound on my skull, that or ask a question, I ...

    Mar 25, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Hourglass No.1

    'Cause you are special, too. :D If there is anything unclear or illegible, please say something. *grins* Cal.

    Mar 20, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sonnet 1 - On a Lost Love

    Did I mention that you are my hero? Sep'ration curtailed by the hands of fate, Prithee, my dear, forgive me for the past, For 'thin me, thou shalt find a ...

    Mar 12, 2007
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Hidden Usergroup

    Oh gods. How lovely. Did Brad just go all covetous on smaur? I do believe he did. HAHAHA! This made me laugh, a lot. Can't wait to read more. This ...

    Mar 12, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Nightime Butterflies

    Sarah, you're back. *huggles* 1. Everything in this world was so new to me, seeing a boy that made my stomach flip was a familiar and welcome feeling. // This ...

    Mar 12, 2007
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Are You Me?

    I don't really have time to do a critique of this write now. But, I saw it and was all 'Whee...' . I'll get around to saying something more constructive ...

    Mar 11, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sonnet 2 - On a Hopeful Love

    Okay, so. I am about to take a twelve gauge to this computer. I spent a very long, detailed time on critiquing this sonnet of yours, and poof. It all ...

    Mar 8, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dolor

    Hey Bradums, (Look who is actually attempting to critique something.) I adore S1, especially the imagery of linen birds. My mother and I used to take napkins and fold them ...

    Mar 8, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight by Stephenie Meyer

    I have a confession to make, I just mooched Twilight , and read it in the span of a few hours. Note, this book is first person narrative. Also note, ...

    Feb 11, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Body and Soul

    Holy frak, Jig. Way to bust out the page-age. I started a crit for you, so far I've done I think the first four pages. I hope to have it ...

    Jan 30, 2007
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Greenjackets (4th draft)

    Cause I can't pass up your historical fiction... Greenjackets [Sharpe! Yay, squee moment.] “Dieu ne pas pour le gros battalions, mais pour sequi teront le meilleur.” – Voltaire ( God ...

    Jan 13, 2007
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: the nine lives of allen grey [r]

    Okay, this really isn't a critique of any sort, cause my brain is in all places at once. I just got back from seeing Children of Men, and this story ...

    Jan 10, 2007


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— H. L. Mencken